Alright. Here's the first batch of screenshots. In screenshots where the error isn't immediately obvious, I've even outlined it in red.
Since there's no spoiler tag, I'll just have links to each screenshot.
Missing line breaks:
http://i.imgur.com/xBRqnOE.jpgCompletely untranslated window that appears when accepting a quest for which you have a CO to clear that quest with an NPC partner character:
http://i.imgur.com/a6tPNOu.pngCompletely untranslated window that appears when you try to take more client orders than your maximum:
http://i.imgur.com/SSvEtdk.pngMissing menu titles/descriptions(There are a ton of these):
•When withdrawing items from storage:
http://i.imgur.com/rvbMa8k.png•When selecting items to attribute grind(Also missing translation for "Hide locked items" option):
http://i.imgur.com/k0eVO66.png•When selecting a Badge Shop:
http://i.imgur.com/pazpLtS.png•Badge shop 1:
http://i.imgur.com/YEVPT0Z.png•Badge shop 2:
http://i.imgur.com/zA4Aw0a.png•Recycling shop:
http://i.imgur.com/qI1eQhr.png•Crafting shop:
http://i.imgur.com/Pa6ecm0.png•When selecting a Rare Stone Shop:
http://i.imgur.com/mN2qyBV.png•Shiny Stone Shop:
http://i.imgur.com/XvqDaog.png•Large Shiny Stone Shop 1:
http://i.imgur.com/J6uL5BL.png•Large Shiny Stone Shop 2:
http://i.imgur.com/rzbPI2z.png•Spellstone Shop:
http://i.imgur.com/oqoTtvs.png•When selecting Photon Drop Shop:
http://i.imgur.com/mDSrpDm.png•Photon Drop Shop:
http://i.imgur.com/w46mwDx.png•When selecting Excube Shop:
http://i.imgur.com/MQgUKzJ.png•Excube Shop:
http://i.imgur.com/8gx1Gyb.png•When selecting Support Partner Salon(Also missing translation for one menu item, and missing capitalization in "Salon"):
http://i.imgur.com/XGg7Uo9.pngUntranslated window titles:
•When partner terminal is unavailable:
http://i.imgur.com/7Cnh066.png•When selecting weapon camos to equip to support partner:
http://i.imgur.com/Rs8mjra.pngUntranslated option when talking to Pudding and cannot accept new Extreme Pass yet(I'm not sure if this one belongs to the story patch or not):
http://i.imgur.com/cu7FFYM.pngMissing translation for "Hide locked item":
•While unlocking potential:
http://i.imgur.com/NSynLoB.png•When affixing abilities:
http://i.imgur.com/OtLyfsZ.png•When attribute grinding:
http://i.imgur.com/k0eVO66.pngIncorrect information while performing item desynthesis(The information implies that you can desynthesize level 10 and under discs, and 6* and under items, for less materials):
http://i.imgur.com/0tH384K.pngPartially untranslated text for premium drinks(Affects all premium drinks, text is the same for each drink):
http://i.imgur.com/vQIZO92.pngIf you like how I'm doing these, tell me, I'll do more.